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    Exclamation My Mentallity ( hotshit )

    Im nasty with the verse , my verbal skill burst,
    open your brain ,I spark mind frames, like sniffing cocaine ,
    im ill , I was born to kill,but left with the pain ,
    deep in my chest , is were it laid, to be the best,
    was my dream, till it melted,
    and dropped, to the earth, from the sky, like the rain ,
    my quest, seemed, helpless, and it popped, in the dirt,
    to die, in vane, im having visions , religion,
    political corruption , genetical technicians
    cloning humans alien abductions ,
    so my assumption is unrecognizable,
    im the rap rage animal / half cannibal ,
    eat up you weak emcees and spin your world like a carnival ,
    this aint no joke , I hit kids and brake them into little stones like crack and coke , we toke and try to forget the misery ,
    wake up kid and take responsibly this is reality..................

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    uppin feedback

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    Neither of those links work, edit in some real ones or this will be closed. If you up this again without leaving working links and this will be closed.

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    humm yo what was this it wasnt good at all you need to work on your structure for one and keep practicing on your shit then you need to work on upping your vocab on this ish maybe if you put time in effort into your peice youll have a nice drop but errbody get better so keep practicing and elevate some and keep dropen werd ~1~

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    wasn't to good of a verse...most of it didn't rhyme, flow kinda off, vocab cane be worked on too....keep writin tho...peace
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    Closed. You didn't reply to the first link and second didn't work, and now you're on the warning list. Fuck around again and you'll be banned.

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