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Thread: A'yo how's my flow?

  1. #1
    LyricalFLow
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    A'yo how's my flow?

    Haven't rapped in awhile so:



    Go suck your mama's tits
    Your raps are shit you can't handle this
    You a gangsta wearing sandles
    I don't know why you battlin' battles that you can't handle
    Your gonna need fate
    I hate your rhymes that you make
    After I beat you your lucky enough if you don't die
    It's either that or I'll punch you nigga, skyhigh
    Then Fuck your girl up in my nissan skyline

  2. #2
    Aquiles
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    Yea bro you need to elevate... You could make it longer cuz that is really short and plus you need to get better word play...its too plain...and use better vocab etc...Just try that shit and keep spittin your bound to get better...

  3. #3
    LyricalFLow
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    Nigga

    Yea thanks nigga.

  4. #4
    Aquiles
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    Ay and leave 2 links to other open mics that you have left good feedback on or else the mods will close this....

    Just some advise...

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    TreaZoN sILLable's Avatar
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    your piece sucked.................point blank....elevate...and try again


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    killer instinctz!! ak-mixa's Avatar
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    u really need to elevate n try to put some genius into ya rhymes and a betta concept.
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  8. #8
    twistmixed
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    Quote Originally Posted by Aquiles
    Yea bro you need to elevate... You could make it longer cuz that is really short and plus you need to get better word play...its too plain...and use better vocab etc...Just try that shit and keep spittin your bound to get better...
    agreed

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