Haven't rapped in awhile so:
Go suck your mama's tits
Your raps are shit you can't handle this
You a gangsta wearing sandles
I don't know why you battlin' battles that you can't handle
Your gonna need fate
I hate your rhymes that you make
After I beat you your lucky enough if you don't die
It's either that or I'll punch you nigga, skyhigh
Then Fuck your girl up in my nissan skyline
Yea bro you need to elevate... You could make it longer cuz that is really short and plus you need to get better word play...its too plain...and use better vocab etc...Just try that shit and keep spittin your bound to get better...
Yea thanks nigga.
Ay and leave 2 links to other open mics that you have left good feedback on or else the mods will close this....
Just some advise...
yo son whos up
your piece sucked.................point blank....elevate...and try again
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u really need to elevate n try to put some genius into ya rhymes and a betta concept.
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agreedOriginally Posted by Aquiles
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