A'yo how's my flow?

[LyricalFlow-X]

I'm goin on da mic wit my spectacula skillz,i know u beggin fo mercy but i'm goin fo da kill,homie my rhymes is ill,and homie my crew is real,cuz whats really good,u should give up right now u really should,i'm dat lil man dat can spit dat fire,homie u need to give up cuz yo rhymes is tired


style switch:


I'm drop a free verse for you real quick.
You wanna see a tree burst? Touch a real D**k.
I'm not a young dude so grown folks hide your kids.
Before I do the lil' bastards like that clown "IT" did.
I'm in the mood for eating emcees, my belly is talking.
Ex-Marine home from his tour, so I'm a pro at stalkin'.
Up on the roof of your city hall scopin' you out.
If I don't get you then, I'm thinkin' bout yolkin' you
and chokin' you out.
This ain't wrestin' dog, you bout as hot as Cena.
Matter of fact your whole style gettin' taken to the cleaners.
SO when you get time to write out your response.
I'll be in the winners circle finger poppin' your moms.

[STAT$]

This was nothing great.......I mean it didn't suck but it wasn't good.....elevate!! Up your vocab and don't stretch lines......Make you rhyming a lil more complex but it was OK.....