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    your ordinary guy



    an ordinary guy, living with hardships to handle his stress
    hmm another round tonight or rescue a damsel in distress?
    I'd rather take misfortune by the hand, or misery instead
    ladies take a good look at me & think chilvary is dead
    a guy can't watch a football game? he's a scandalous sinner
    because sunday & monday nights are for candle lit dinners?
    schedule it around your life are the cons & pros fair now?
    a lost image of the old blue eyes sinatra pose & staredown
    mr.congeniality? I'm not stuck in a messiahs crime state
    it's better to be half intoxicated then in Mariahs mind state
    cupids shooting blanks, I've developed a worthless woo &
    a sympathetic girl bartender to me... is the perfect women
    A forgotten purpose, consider a switchblade or deadly razor
    I’m in no rush though I kill brain cells in every flavor
    I skipped aa meeting, I can't admit a problem or ask for help
    a problem it's a hobby, can they get past themselves
    I stand correct... not a follower of where the rest stand
    there preaching & singing church hymns to a deaf man
    I can't love, because I don't love myself? is my health over
    maybe I do love myself? so much I don't love myself sober
    Well maybe it's not that noble, me going to church for wine
    Adding vodka to the holy water & saying the hurt is fine
    Why tease taste buds & be reminiscent of the better stuff
    After one drink it’s the stuff, but one drink is never enough

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    good rhyme scheme..good vocab...good imagery...creative topic..but i didnt care for the topic..dont know why.....your flow could use a little more complexity though..other than that...average drop..keep elevatin and droppin.~1`


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    intresting take.

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    anyone else?

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