Doc's mart in seconds was pretty dope. the only complaint i have( and i literally had to break both bars down to find issues to choose a winner) is the set up. kick this lame brand came off as forced. i think find another way to link the ideas would have served this bar better. but thats it both bars were fire imo. i thought ex was very methodical on his word choice to make the impact of the concept "softmod" relevant.
v/Ex
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Ex had the cleaner wording/execution but the impact was light.
Spree had the more creative and impactful punch but choppy wording.
Tough call, and in most cases - I would always vote for the cleaner wording/delivery but I think Sprees was just a tad bit more solid, as far as impact.
Spree with the Edge.
Ur late lmao this shit in the closed section… drops some votes in LLLOriginally Posted by Amen
Ex - brilliantly cheeky in how 'personal' it was. I caught and loved the double meaning in 'bypassing restrictions' in as a software and RB sense.
Spree - you struck me as a more seasoned writer, the way you weaved in the brand, shopping and mart references in both lines. Well done, though I think it might have been overdone to the extent that it dulls the edge/punchiness of what you're saying. I think Ex tipped you on this point.
v/ Ex
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