Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES
Rebuttal Option
both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)
You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle
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first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@MV
@Slayerr.
Kill you where you stand, it’s not beyond me, police tape n black BM’s
I’ll discard ur body n leave it on scene like one of the hoes in my DMs
banging Polar Bears in jail, heard you smashed the majority
U went to prison with AIDS then the Aryans started testing for Purity
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. Slayerr aka Purity
Last edited by MV; June 11th, 2024 at 08:25 PM
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I got MV here, better wording hits smoother. Old concept but it ties together better and is more layered than the other dudes
3TC
you look depressed as fuck in video mags, your fate is unfurled
I knew cameras add 10 lbs, didn't know it could add the weight of the world
Aero the Black Pegasus
this is tough both Punchlines fresh and clean
I felt like slayer a lil bit more creative compare to MV
Vote-Slayer
The order of events in Slayerr's bar was wild. Begins with the murder of MV, then there's the crime scene taped off by police, after which he manages to discard the body by leaving it back at the scene lol. It actually follows on to MV's bar about you being in jail quite well. The hoes in my DM's closer was aight.
MV deffo had the superior bar here, set up the testing for purity punch well and it hit harder. Also scored extra points for it not being applicable to anyone as was the case with Slayerr's.
VOTE MV
Slayer- I enjoyed the development from the killing to the discarding of the body. You did so much in just two lines. Painted a picture that still rhymes and 'left him on scene'. Good work.
MV - Cleverer lines, for sure, but perhaps a bit too much packed into it for me. Made it more dense and a bit clunky. Definitely a strong bar, but I found Slayer to edge this with his smoother flow. Just.
Both these bars were dope.
I like slayerr bar because it’s actually pretty witty and the content was so full and fulfilling.
The negative for me is I feel it’s not necessarily a personal as this can be used on another person and work just as well.
But it’s flamesssss
Mv
I like this bar because it’s more humorous than slayerr and it is a personal but an old personal thought.
What I don’t like is how old the personal seems to be as I wouldn’t have known slayerr has a second alias maybe from way back.
Both bars are equally nice in different categories for me. I really am on the edge here but I’ll have no choice but to go with MV honestly if Mv didn’t clear up where purity came from and I thought it was no relationship to slayerr id have probably gone slayerr but tbf both hit pretty well the edge for me is which was more personal. Sorry slayerr man great job hats off to you mate
FAQ - pronounced fack…
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it should read Fa, Q, I read it for kicks
I liked Slayerr a little more here. Connected better for me VOTE slay
3-3 next vote wins
I thought both did well here. I hate when punches have to be explained OUTSIDE the bar itself... mv if you had found a way to weave your explanation into your bar I would have voted for you
Vote slay
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